The hairy egg

Posted by Emily in Learning | 1 Comment

Ones there was a family of hairy eggs with black yoke for there insaids.one day a  man who was in a jacket,a minecraft teesht and black trousers with a fringe came and said”would you like to have dinner with me at 10am Solent road Dibden purlieu Wednesday?”The hairy eggs replied with”yes we would love that”. The day came as quick as a flash the hairy eggs whent to the mans house and knocked on the door. The man came out of the house and let them in.When it was time for dinner he gave them their dinner.Then with a flick of light he picked them up and made a horrible mistake .

 

look at the next whun.By Emily .

 

One response to “The hairy egg”

  1. Mrs Addleton says:

    Congratulations on publishing your first blog Emily! Hopefully it will be the first of many because this was a funny little story, making good use of this weeks tricky prompt. Check your spelling of once, went and insides although I know you might have typed this on a small screen which makes it harder. I loved the way you left us in suspense at the end, I am guessing the man dropped those poor little eggs!
    3 House Points
    Mrs Addleton

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