The Haircut!

Posted by Eden in 100wc | 1 Comment

I woke up this morning , I needed a hair cut ! So i got up ,got dressed and jumped in the car and i drove to the hair dressers .I sat in the chair and waited for them to be finished but then i relised that i had eggs on my t-shirt! They were done finally and they had done my fringe wrong!

I went home and washed my black t-Shirt then the lights started flickering i didn’t take much notice untill everyting went BLACK…

I was terrified and i didn’t know what to do ,I curled up on the sofa…

One response to “The Haircut!”

  1. Mrs Addleton says:

    Hi Eden, this was a tricky set of words to incorporate into a story so you did well! I think that if you had longer you could improve your blog by checking a few spellings and using some different sentence starters to keep the reader interested. I hate it when the hairdressers cut my fringe wrong and double bad luck to find egg on your shirt!
    3 HP
    Mrs Addleton

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