one day Neville told harry that the fat lady had been kidnapped but how did she just disappear said Neville but the fat lady whould just scream. the next day was terrible because I got sad of Sirius black so I kept on giving him flowers because Bellatrix lestrange killed him AKA murded him. the next day snape teached us how to do a magic duel I did it against ron I WON harry did it against Malfoy harry won. hi ron percy told us that hermione kicked yo butt. the next day was sad because gilderoy lockhart took me to detention because I was backfired people and I backfired professor mgonaggall. how on earth did you do that said Ronald. now dolores Umbridge sacked Dumbledore to azcaban. did the killing curse on dobby the house elf whos been free but I don’t care said hermione.
Thank you so much Mrs AdelltoN . I think your the best teacher ever because your so nice and I hope you have lovely days. lots of love luke
Hello Luke,
This was your first published blog! Congratulations. I know that you have been working on this for some time and that you are the worlds biggest HP fan (sorry Mrs Stevens). Don’t forget that sentences need to start with capital letters as do proper nouns such as peoples names.
I can’t wait to read your next blog.
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Mrs Addleton