The boy in the woods: Part 1…

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This is perhaps the worst story a I ever have made in my whole life, it’s just a wonderful warning 🙂 .

On day William went out for a stroll to the lake. He packed up his things and walked into woods, not knowing what lied in wait for him. Half the way to the lake he bumped into a stranger, dare he know that his fate laid in this fellows hands. He followed this strange bloke deeper into the wood. The man he was following went to a shack and bought something out that looked like TNT. I ran over just quick enough to stop him lighting it…

One response to “The boy in the woods: Part 1…”

  1. Mrs Addleton says:

    Sounds like the start of a brilliant adventure William. I think the past tense of lie is lay and make sure you don’t flip between first and third person. Looking forward to the next instalment!
    2 house points
    Mrs Addleton

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