CHRISTMAS EVE
THE DAY OF CHRISTMAS EVE, I WAS SUPER EXCITED BECAUSE I WAS GETTING. A PRESENT BUT MUM SAID I GET TO OPEN IT A DAY EARLY ” WHAT ” I WENT. CRAZY TO OPEN IT I LOOKED AT THE BALL BALL AND I SAW THE OCEAN I ALSO SAW A HOLLY TO THEN BEFORE BED I GOT TO OPEN IT I WAS SO HAPPY WITH MY PRESENT I WAS HAPPY
nice Christmas blog .
What about mine Lewis 🙁
Kade, you have left me in suspense; what was the present that made you so happy? You have really taken on board previous comments about using sentences so well done for this although some full stops weren’t in quite the right place. If you give me a shout next time, I can help you with this. I love the way you describe the ocean inside the baubal.
2 house points
Mrs Addleton