the day of night

Posted by William in 100wc | Tagged | 1 Comment

One day there was a boy that wanted to play outside his name was Jack. He always played with his friend Maximus. Whenever they played they always went to a forest nearby. They also like to explore in different places that blew their mind. One day they were going to the park at night. Their parents knew and thought it was ok, so they went all the way to the park and was surprised when they saw a light. They didn’t know what it was so they persuaded each other to go and touch it ended up Maximus as Jack was holding his shoulder something magical happened they both shot up in the air as it was a wave of water flooding their skin they didn’t know what happened.the blindly walked up a pair of stairs in front of them and they saw something unlivable …

One response to “the day of night”

  1. Mrs Addleton says:

    My goodness William, you really have the blogging bug. This is almost like sci-fi genre and reminds me of the first Doctor Who from the current series. I think at the end you meant ‘unbelievable’ so double check this spelling but you effectively us on a cliffhanger and I can’t wait to find out what happens next.
    Another 3 house points
    Mrs Addleton

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