…Toady I woke up in the in the Sahara desert !!!!! As the pyramid got built I went in to steel the King then it turned into a trap run for a second I though what is and not deadly.
. Bees
. completeness
. getting told off
then I ran across the trap run But I was exhausted by all the spike traps. finally I got to the king then the guards came out of nowhere!!! As I ran it stared spraying pink bubbles then it fired a bicycle and a empty but poisoned box. Then the developer appeared not a fake developer a real devle …
to be contued
Hi Robert,
This was an action packed piece in true Indiana Jones style; very exciting. I liked your use of the prompts and wonder how an empty poisoned box could be deadly? Don’t forget to check sentences start with a capital letter. I’m looking forward to the next instalment.
3 HP
Mrs Addleton