A awesome night!

Posted by Eden in 100wc | 2 Comments

Tonight, I have a party and everyone is coming.But when i was texting people i made a mistake,I sent it to a celebrity!And guess what they said…

YES…                                                                                                                                       I couldn’t believe it ,she even arrived at my door,with a hard knock.                         KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK.

It was like everything to me it was Ariana Grande,the famous singer at my door!                   She litteraly arrived in a limo!The shock was high.We started with kareoke and a pint of lemonade.We stayed up until 9am. I gave her the spare room downstairs, she even put me in one of her music videos.I’m exhasted.

2 responses to “A awesome night!”

  1. Michael (Team 100wc) says:

    Hi Eden,
    Great story! It sounds like you had lots of fun with Ariana Grande, did you sing her new song at the karaoke? Something to improve on would be to check your spellings. Keep up the good work!
    Michael (Team 100wc), Derbyshire, UK

  2. Mrs Addleton says:

    Hi Eden, sounds like one night of the rock and role lifestyle of a pop star was definately exhausting! You’ve used some great punctuation in this blog but remember that you need a capital I when referring to yourself and you should try and use the prompt exactly as it is given which this week was ‘but they were exhausted.’
    2 house points
    Mrs Addleton

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