ONE STORM DARK NIGHT, SOME NAUGHTY MISCHIEF TEENAGER (BOYS) HAD A SLEEP OVER AND WANTED TO WATCH A HORROR MOVIE BUT THERE WASN’T ONE ON. SO THEY WENT OUT ON A ADVENTURE IN THE WOODS AND THEN THEY STUMBLED ALONG D A HAUNTED HOUSE THEY WALKED INTO A ROOM IN THE HOUSE AND THEY GOT TAPED . INSIDE AND FOUND 29 KNIFES IN THE WALL AND WHEN THEY WALKED UP THE STAIRS THEY. ALMOST GOT STABBED THEY RAN AND RAN TRYING TO FIND OUT WHO ALMOST STABBED THEM THEY FOUND OUT BUT IT TURNS OUT TO BE A MONSTER SUPER SCARY “RUN.”
Terrifying Kade well done
This would have been a good blog for Halloween Kade because it is very scary. Capital letters are only needed for the start of a sentence or proper nouns but perhaps you wanted to use upper case all the way through to add effect? Your first sentence made perfect use of commas and full stops so check the whole blog to make sure all your full stops were in the right place – I can help you with this next week if you would like. For me, the best bit of your blog was how you described the gang ‘stumbled’ across the house.
Well done,
2 house points
Mrs Addleton
Definitely would Kade I agree.