I went out to a race. My friends were there too, I ran over there to say hello. ” 3 2 1 Go!!!! ” Called the starter. I started running as soon as he said ” go, ” I ran faster than I could think. We still had 1/2 of the race but I was exhausted, I called my friends to help, but they were exhausted too. I kept on running until my legs gave way, the next drink station was only 26 meters away I dragged myself towards the station. I had a drink and refueled on a snack and started running again. My friends were just a few meters behind me when… I won!
But they were exhausted…
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Thanks Mrs Addleton!
What a fabulous blog William, I am so pleased you signed up today, returned in golden time and then finished your blog at home because this was a real treat to read. You made brilliant use of the prompt, used a great variety of punctuatlion and selected some good vocabulary which made this fun and exciting to read.
I really hope we get the chance to read more blogs from you,
3 house points
Mrs Addleton