When people were running for there life they nearly killed their-self for it just for donation. But they were so exhausted from trying to run for donation. But as i was saying they nearly killed their-self by running. But after the race that they passed out and then they had to go to the hospital [poor them]. But then unfortunately the doctors couldn’t get them back to life then they had to go and have a funeral guess what it was both of them.But at least they won the competition and then they had to give to their niece.Then she spent it all on………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… stuffed animals but i don’t blame her she’s only 6 so don’t you judge her. But this is the end of Poppie’s story corner. See you next time.
Poppie, Clever idea to use a race as the reason for exhaustion this week. Don’t forget that we say ‘themselves’ rather than ‘their-selves.’ You wrote about fundraising for charity a couple of weeks ago – is this a theme you like to write about? What would you spend your inheritance on I wonder?
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Mrs Addleton