john went out to London he went to big Ben it was 100 ft tall. theo was surprised ” wow”. That is very tall you now if you go to London you will see big Ben😃. There is also the palace that the queen lives in. London is the capital of England there are a lot of gangstas in London. Then Theo found his friend Lewis. They went shopping then Lewis got a notification. it said. Fortnite season 7 is out play now if you want to freeze. so the rushed home to play fortnite then 4 hours later they were exhausted. so they went to go to sleep and then a ,dinosaur came in to there house.
theos time in London
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Hi Theo
What an action packed time you had, no wonder you were so exhausted at the end of the story! I was a little unsure about the appearance of a dinosaur in your final story, it almost felt as though this should have been kept for the next paragraph when John and Lewis had their next big adventure.
Miss T team 100wc
I’ve been to London.
Good work Theo I’m impressed with your knowledge!
Hi Theo, my goodness you fit a lot of ideas and facts into this blog! You know a lot about London – have you visited before? I wonder how many gangsters you saw? Your use of the prompt was clever and I think I’ve seen lots of exhausted children at school who might have been up a bit too late on their computer games! I’m not too sure about the ending; it felt a bit disjointed from the rest of the blog.
3 house points
Mrs Addleton