i just went to the movie

Posted by Theo in 100wc | 1 Comment

i went to the movie and then i went home. i saw my family i said ” why are you here?”. then my mum said ”turn on the TV.”. so i said ”OK”. i turned on the TV and then i saw my self onĀ  TV. ”wow!”” how did i get on TV”. everyone didn’t know but i was lucky because…. I WON 100 MILLION POUNDS !! But then it said Lewis,Kade,Jenson and Archie where with Theo . And they were the first one to see the boss worm and they won. ”yes yes yes yes” I won I won i won”. WELL DONE” ”THANK YOU”

One response to “i just went to the movie”

  1. Mrs Addleton says:

    Hello Theo,
    This was a fun blog and a great idea for using this tricky prompt. Remember to use the prompt exactly next time though; this week you needed to use ‘we seemed to be on the television’. You used a fantastic variety of punctuation which made it easy to read but make sure you check capital letters at the start of your sentences. Microsoft Word autocorrects but the blog doesn’t.
    Great blogging,
    3 house points
    Mrs Addleton

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