one day a lonely bike got stuck in a tree wheres the owner he must of ran away how did it get so rusty how does it look so old ? was it left in the rain it was horrible a bike like that wow! it could of done a couple tricks what kind of owner was he or did he leave out in the rain and put it in a tree because he fell of and broke a bone or something because that is a really good bike if it hadn’t had got left in the rain and got struck by lightning and always got treated badly were in the world would you leave a really good bike its terrible he could of sold it to dome one or something not make it grow in the tree and leave it there.
Kia ora Zade. I really like how this picture has got you thinking about all the adventures this bike might have had! Well done – I really enjoyed your 100 Word Challenge. Keep up the great writing Zade.
Hello Zade,
Congratulations on publishing your first blog. You made some good enquiries and observations about this mysterious bike. Don’t forget to break up your writing with sentences using capital letters at the start and full stops at the end. I doubt that bike would fetch much money if anyone tried to sell it now!
3 house points
Mrs Addleton