In a mysterious woods, lied a mysterious tree. That tree had all its leaves, but not all of its body.One day a biker came along and wasn’t looking ,without a dash…He crashed! There were no chance of surviving that.A few years later the bike was wedged between the gnarled tree.The bike rusted from all the rain and the vines of the tree had grew over it.It was like it was eating it!The broken chain was hanging on the side of the tree,rotting. The more it rains, the more it rusts.Poor little fellow.
Hi Eden! Great story,great description and I love the word gnarled you used!
Congratulations on publishing your first ever blog Eden! I loved the way you described the way the tree had grown around the bike as if it were gradually consuming it. Your description was made very effective with the vocabulary you chose. Don’t forget that the past tense of lie is lay and we often use commas after fronted adverbials. I really hope you get some comments from http://www.100wc readers and that you publish many more entertaining blogs for us to read.
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Mrs Addleton