I was looking around my friends house when i noticed a door that i hadn’t seen before. went and got my friend to ask what was behind the door. I was wondering what was behind the door. My friend said that he hadn’t seen it before either so we opened it and we couldn’t believe what we saw. ” What are we looking at ” ” I think it is the first world war ” We stared at the horror of war.
Congratulations on publishing your first blog and it’s lovely to see that you were inspired to write about rememberence after the school assembly. Remember to read what you have written back to yourself to check no words are missing and watch out because the blog does not autocorrect i to I like word. I really hope we get the pleasure of reading more blogs from you.
3 house points
Mrs Addleton