killer clown!!!!!!!

Posted by Bradley in 100wc | 4 Comments

Long ago, I walked up to a creepy house.  It had a smashed window it and it felt like someone was watching me! There was a door.I wondered what was behind the door! I opened the door.  It was a killer clown and it came after me! finally I lost him my heart was beating. I went  back to the door and it was covered with blood this moment I was freaked out and then I got jumped scared I was even scared. my heart was beating my mum didn’t know because I told here I was at my friends house the end.

4 responses to “killer clown!!!!!!!”

  1. jack c says:

    great work if i was a teacher i would give you 1000 house point.

  2. Bradley says:

    To brad I like your blog you maked me skeard

  3. Jack says:

    hi brad it is me jackd I like your blog

  4. Mrs Addleton says:

    Well done Bradley – you have given up many play times to publish your first blog. I loved the way you made us feel uneasy about the house by the way you described it. Using very short sentences also made me feel scared. You used lots of full stops to break up sentences in the first half but the second half could be improved with some punctuation.
    I can’t wait to read more of your blogs,
    2 house points
    Mrs Addleton

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