Danced fighter bath clumsily orange
My little orange cat was a strong cat fighter. He is very clumsily falls over. He falls in bath and I say ”you clumsy cat”. The orange,clumsy cat fell over clumsily. Like he doesn’t already!!!Like always I had to pick him up and then I fell in the bath.one day I had to try and beat up a fighter with orange hair in a boxing ring! So I tried but I ended with a tooth knocked out! My orange cat every day when I have dinner he jumps on me and gets me all hairy.
Hi Theo, Your cat seems to be a lively little thing and I suspect a bit mischievous even. Thank you for this lovely 100WC story that I enjoyed reading. Perhaps you might improve it a little by reading it over a few times when you have finished. This can help you to feel if it is is put together well.
Theo, congratulations on publishing your first ever blog! I have trouble with hairy cats who like to jump on me when I’m eating my dinner but mine won’t go near the bath! I think you could improve your blog by not using the word ‘like’ so often and making sure you go back and read it before publishing although I know you didn’t have time in Golden Time. Can’t wait to read more of your blogs,
2 house points
Mrs Addleton