when i started dance

Posted by Layla P in 100wc, Learning | 1 Comment

i was looking for a shop. i tryed to find tesco when suddenly i saw a dance school i went in it reminded me of a time when i lost my teddy i was looking for it when i found gymnasics i went in to dance they said you dont have to pay for your first lesson my sister was with me she said we would love to i realy wanted to do it and we done it i have done it for 4 years now i still do it i set my mind of for a bit but love it

One response to “when i started dance”

  1. Mrs Addleton says:

    Hello Layla,
    It was fantastic to hear how you accidently found something you really enjoy. This was a really tricky Prompt to put into a blog so well done for managing to do it without any help. You could improve your next blog by using capital I when you are talking about yourself and breaking up your writing into sentences with full stops and capital letters.

    Well done,
    2 house points
    Mrs Addleton

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