Secret Statues

Posted by Calleigh H in 100wc, Learning | Tagged | 1 Comment

Deep in an ancient forest, hid three, secret, stone, super-power statues.  During the day, these mysterious creatures  were  as still as a building but at night they come a live and atack the hole world. When it is morning they go to the place and have a cup a tea .When the wind hit them they fell over and they smashed to smitherines.

One response to “Secret Statues”

  1. Mrs Addleton says:

    Hi Calleigh,
    The thought of these evil super-power statues having a cup of tea in the forest clearing after a night of being bad made me smile. I love the way you have taken inspiration from the windy weather we have had recently and described it as a force of good by smashing the statues. Don’t forget that ‘hole’ is a hole in the ground but ‘whole’ is the whole of something e.g. The whole world.
    2 house points
    Mrs Addleton

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