The Explorer

Posted by Elisia T in 100wc | 1 Comment

On Friday the 13th there was a war and everyone was at school so our teacher had to take us into a mauve minibus. it was very scary. she took us to a farm and only 7 people where going to stay with the farmer and that was me, lily, Sinead , lily hutch, Kacey , jade , Darcey the farmer was a lady and she had lots of trees and she has an ALLIGATER and me and lily tried to climb a tree but it was tricky and we fell. the farmer had 4 horses 2 cows and 5 birds 29 fish.                                                                                                                                                                                                                 THE END BYE BYE EVERYONE

One response to “The Explorer”

  1. Mrs Addleton says:

    Cnogratualations for being the first person to publish a 100wc blog this year! You did well to come up with a story in the short space of golden time and the idea of being evacuated to an unusual farm is one with plenty of scope for adventure. You could improve your blog by checking your punctuation (especially capital letters for proper nouns) and making sure you stay in the same tense throughout.
    Lovely to see you back blogging,
    2 house points
    Mrs Addleton

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