the twisty gun

Posted by Rosie in 100wc | 3 Comments

Hello my name is Rosie this morning I saw a twisty gun;a strong man had twisted it into a circle .I was so astonished that I almost fainted .My sister Laila came and took me into my class giraffes .Suddenly I was in a big lair where there was lots of guns .All of the guns were twisty and I saw a very strong man .And at his side there was a pile of straight guns .Suddenly I was back in class .Mrs Stevens seemed to be frozen every one was .I went  to the rest of my school and the whole school was frozen .I was so scared that a man came and calmed me down “hello” he said “h-h-hello” I said to him ,”m-m-my name’s Rosie “.”my name’s Sidney “The man said in a low voice “I didn’t mean to scare you , please accept my apology.”Come on school blog to see the rest !


3 responses to “the twisty gun”

  1. Mrs Bowden says:

    Hi Rosie,
    What wonderful writing. I feel like I really want to know what happens next. I do hope you carry on blogging.

  2. Mrs Boyce says:

    Hi Rosie,
    Thank you for sharing your writing with us this week.
    I feel honoured to be reading your very first post. Well done!
    I can see how you would be frightened with all the guns around you – so would I!
    I’m wondering what’s actually going on here…Are you dreaming? Or perhaps you have gone through a portal?
    Keep up the great work & I look forward to reading lots more of your stories.

    Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)

  3. Mrs Addleton says:

    Hi Rosie,
    What a wonderful debut blog, well done. It’s almost dreamlike the way you describe suddenly going from one place to another. I love the way you used the words ‘astonished’ and ‘lair’. I really hope you continue to blog and enter the 100wc when you have left Wildground.
    3 house points
    Mrs Addleton

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