the story of an old friends gun ( The play script)

Posted by CharlieG in 100wc | 3 Comments

OK  so you may not believe what I’m about to tell you .  This is a story of the gun outside the UN building in America . As it will shock you all .  Years ago my friend owned this gun it was his prised possession you see he crafted this out uranium .  while he was building it the world  was over run .

Giant 1 ”SMASH”

Jay ”RRUUUNN”

Jonathan ”No HIDE”

Sabrina ”Just shut up ok , it won’t hear us”

Jonathan ”It doesn’t matter have you see the barrel on that gun it’s not like it’ll shoot us”

 

as they hoped the Giant didn’t see them they sprinted towards the door they were met by a warlock  triple their size they screeched to a halt and turned around thy were met with a huge twisted barrel right in their faces

 

Jay  ‘parillized’ ”uuuuhhhhh i guess we run ”

Sabrina ”oh for god sake i’ m fighting”

 

Narrator ”As she charged towards them the mase of the warlock swang and crushed all three .  Eventually the Giants were extinguished .

THE END

3 responses to “the story of an old friends gun ( The play script)”

  1. Summer Callis says:

    Charlie,
    This is inventive and very creative writing. I love how the story evolves and I wanted there to be more! Making the story flow a bit more is something you could work on but well done you should be proud.

  2. Sophie says:

    I am so impressed with your writing Charlie. I really enjoyed your opening paragraph, it was very gripping and caused me to continue reading. Remember not to use too many spaces when you are typing. You had great use of speech as well. Well done/

  3. Mrs Addleton says:

    WOW Charlie, this must be the first play-script 100wc blog I have ever read (and we have certainly read a lot over the past 9 months)! This was full on action and exciting to read. Checking some punctuation might improve it by making it easier for the reader to read it fluidly & keep up with the fast pace of the story. Very well done, and it was lovely to have you back blogging this week.
    3 house points
    Mrs Addleton

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