I cant believe I killed my un unicorn .I AM SO SAD . hopefully she forgives me and makes lots of friends whilst being in heaven .I wish I had listened to my mum she said don’t touch the pocket knife for my granddads work .ITS NOT MY FAULT I KILLED IT .ill explain well I picked it up and it shook me and I ACIDENTALLY killed my unicorn . I didn’t know it vibrates so I have nothing to do with this its not fair I always get BLAMED but the fact im grounded makes me feel sick.
I like unicorn dinosaurs and I killed it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Another interesting tale Demi – your piece is like an informal diary entry. I think when you read this back carefully you will notice some punctuation and words missing as well as capital letters at the start of sentences. Unfortunately I agree with your mum; you picked up the pen-knife when you were warned not to.
1 house point
Mrs Addleton