The era beast

Posted by George B in 100wc, Learning | 2 Comments

The era beast is a inter-dimensional menace it has a beard thingamajig that tears open the rift between physical entity’s and spiritual entity’s. the era beast can open rifts between time, space, reality and physical objects. The era beast is only as big as a small springer spaniel but don’t be scoffing and going “well that’ll be easy to defeat” cause it wont, in the era beasts case, size wont mater in a battle. the era beast has a shrill cry that lures any good person too it, thinking its a cry lost girl, but then that decent honest person gets gobbled up. the era beast has a line a poisonous claws that rip through his back. the era beast is native to a small settlement in  the middle of the fire desert. the era beast also has a horn, like a unicorn, on its forehead that shoots out electricity. the maleficent beast has hoofs to keep it steady and it looks like some camel tracks, so anyone would follow them, thinking it will lead to a mean of traveling, but then getting gobbled up. the final thing this beast has to offer is a scorpion tail, long, thin and deadly, but instead of emitting venom, the era beast emits a toxic gas that can infiltrate the lungs and stop them from working. that is all the era beast does, the end…

2 responses to “The era beast”

  1. Mrs Dibben says:

    Wow, to think I always thought beards were pointless yet your magnificent creature is able use his to rip apart physical and spiritual entities. A spectacular yet terrifying creature indeed.

  2. Mrs Addleton says:

    Goodness gracious George, I hope I never meet one of these although I would certainly love to see one at a distance; they sound spectacularly terrifying! You have done really well to integrate features from the blurb on the back of the new book to make your creature relevant to the authors story. Your ideas and vocabulary are stunning but next time think about mixing up your sentence starters as many of your sentences start with ‘the era beast….’.
    Lovely to see you back blogging
    3 house points
    Mrs Addleton

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