the night zoo keeper finds a mysterious animal!

Posted by Poppie in 100wc, Learning | 2 Comments

An  Alicorn which is the most magical creature in the universe. They eat candy canes for breakfast, lunch, dinner and dessert so they have an extreme sweet tooth. Alicorns are nice and kind hearted so they wont hurt you. They trot gracefully and fly like an angel. They live in the magical pink lake where the candy cane trees grow in grace. They are as sweet as a lollipop.

2 responses to “the night zoo keeper finds a mysterious animal!”

  1. Mrs Dibben says:

    Hello Poppie,
    What a wonderful creature the Alicorn must be. I would think it would have to keep eating sweets and candy to maintain such a sweet disposition.

  2. Mrs Addleton says:

    Poppie, what a gentle and graceful creature the Alicorn sounds – you used some fantastic adjectives and similies. It is fabulous that you used the blurb on the back of the book that they hope to publish as this would make your magical beast relevant to the story. I am totally in love with the idea of candy cane trees that only grow along the banks of the pink lake but worry what would happen to the Alicorns if the lake dried up and the trees didn’t produce candy cane?
    Well done, 3 house points
    Mrs Addleton

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