“When did my package arrive” I said to myself thoughtfully. Why does it have a hole in it? Has something got in to my surprise? I don’t know why my item has gone.SOMEONE HAS STOLEN MY ITEM. I’m so angry grrrrrrrrrrr.I don’t know why someone would steal something from me I’m sweat and innocent.Even though a person might’ve stole my item it’s fine no one knows that so it is a secret. So i have to keep this a big secret ok mind so don’t tell me to tell anyone cuz in need to go to sleep bye so go away. SHOO SHOO.
“when did it arrive?” I said…
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Hello,
I loved your use of questions and all the contradictions in your tale.
Hi Poppie,
The start of your blog really drew me in, particularly the way you were pondering over this mystery! I wonder what had been in the package. The ‘shoo, shoo’ at the end was very clever.
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Mrs Addleton