Yesterday I shouted really loud because of Callum. He annoys me really bad. My blood is a very rich crimson colour, so I get scared if I go down that hole. A misty ghost and they are dirty so they have dust and dirt on them they have been alive for 7 centuries . I frantically ran in school because I was to hyper so I took my friend Eva down to the ground . the graveyard is as creepy as a ghost so you never want to be in there , but this is scary as a skeleton.
You used some good vocabulary. When you finish writing, re-read before publishing – can you see missing capitals or too many spaces around punctuation?
Mr. M. (Team 100WC)
Bedfordshire, UK