BODYLESS LEGS!!

Posted by Izzy P in 100wc | 2 Comments

One day, a GIANT monster named Moni was walking when he found a big Bodyless  pair of legs! Ring Ring . Ring Ring! “Oh that’s my phone!” says moni theres a pair of walking sauseges.

. Hello? Oh hi this is the police. there is a pair of legs running around the forest! oh I have seen it ! oh good . bye! bye! beep. HA HA Were going to put you silly legs in jail in 2002.  In 2002, The police came and stole lots of money . Ok you bodyless legs, time to put you in jail .  I really think there sauseges now! the end!

2 responses to “BODYLESS LEGS!!”

  1. Mrs Dibben says:

    Hello Izzy,

    This story made me laugh and the pace made me a little dizzy.

  2. Mrs Addleton says:

    Hello Izzy,
    I like this fast paced story and I was getting really worried about Moni being in the forest with these bank robbing bangers! You have made a great effort at using lots of different punctuation which makes your blog entertaining to read although I did get a bit confused if the police actually stole the money or the sausages did near the end.
    Well done, 3 house points Izzy!
    Mrs Addleton

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