Once there was a ordinary forest with millions of trees . There was a little girl called hope . Hope was very shy and she loved reading . her mum and dad called her a bookworm . The next day her parents made up a beastly idea t. the idea was to abandon her in the forest so they took her to the woods asleep . once her parents left she woke up and gasped “WHY AM I HERE ! she flooded with tears .She went to hunt for food . she saw the weirdest tree EVER she walked closer and closer until … THE TREE KIKDED HERE!
Demi, what a fabulous blog which reminds me of those scary fairy tales like Hansel and Gretal or Red Riding Hood! I felt so sorry for Hope when she became flooded with tears. Perhaps Hope had read all those fairy tales about brave children and will defeat the tree & find plenty of food in the forest. Don’t forget to check the start of all your sentences have capital letters.
3 house points,
Mrs Addleton
Hello Demi,
Welcome to the wonderful world of blogging . I loved the low key way you started the blog describing the ‘ordinary ‘ forest and your great description of the girl in the story. This made the next part where she was abandoned all the more shocking.
I do so hope she gets rescued soon.
Perhaps you could get your brother to help you proof read your next blog.