One day there was two little people called Daniel and Katelin they were walking through the forest and Daniel said, “Isn’t it a wonderful day today!” And katelin said ” yes it is a wonderful day today!”
after a while they saw a tree walking then other then another . soon they were all walking . Katelin was very scared but Daniel was not very scared because he was a boy and boys don’t get scared…
your is good but when its my one its going to be good
Hello Katelyn,
I did enjoy reading this, the last line made me laugh. I wonder do you really believe boys don’t get scared or was this a tongue in cheek comment.
Hi Katelin,
This sounds like the start of an intriguing tale. You worked hard to get the punctuation with the inverted commas right and I can very well imagine you and Daniel chatting together on a woodland stroll. However, I’m not sure I agree that boys never get scared!
2 house points
Mrs Addleton