Once there was a boy cold Tai. He had a toy car and he decided to play with it after school on the way in the road. One of Tai’s friends took his toy car and threw it in the drainpipe. It came down the drainpipe and hit the bottom with a clatter. Tai suddenly ran to the drainpipe and tried to get it out but he couldn’t reach the toy car. He tried to get it out with some net but he still couldn’t get it so he walked home sadly. The next day, early in the morning Tai’s friend got the toy car out of the drainpipe and brought it to Tai’s house and left a note to say sorry for throwing it down the drainpipe.
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Welcome to the wonderful world of blogging Olly. I really liked reading your short story. I was pleased Tai’s friend rescued his car and returned it .
I look forward to reading your next blog.
Congratulations on publishing your first ever blog Olly. You have used some great vocabulary in this blog and I love the way Tai’s friend made amends for what he did. Don’t forget that the past tense of call is called, not cold.
I hope you have been inspired to come back and publish many more blogs.
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