Posted by Lauren N in 100wc | 5 Comments

One lovely summer day there was this family , they used to be a statue in Town but that wasn’t real they were fake just standing there frozen.So one day the went to estate agent and bought a house in Hythe and lived there for the rest of their lives. 1 year later they bought a chimna so they can burn their family pictures the husband said ”i’m braking up with you u burned my favourite picture ” the wife said ”sorry ard ” she was rude.So she carried on until the baby / toddler said ” hate u mummy u burned my favourite picture. So he moved out with his dad.

5 responses to “THE UGLY FAMILY”

  1. Mrs Venables says:

    I certainly wasn’t expecting your blog Lauren, from looking at the picture! It just shows how we all have different imaginations & can see the same picture differently. I look forward to your next blog & would like to see something that includes your bubbly personality. Well done Lauren.

  2. Mya says:

    Little funny but sad at the same time.

  3. Kate Wilson says:

    What a sad story Lauren – I hope you have the chance to write something more smiley next time. Well done for publishing your blog.

  4. Lauren N says:

    thank you for the 3 house points maybe i should do that

  5. Mrs Addleton says:

    Lauren, it’s lovely to have you back blogging. Your title intrigued me because initially, the picture made me think of a peaceful, serene family because I thought they looked friendly and happy. Now I have read your blog, I see them in a different light! I think you could make your blog even better by avoiding spelling that you use in texts for the word ‘you’ and writing it in full. Also, you could perhaps write ‘the wife replied rudely’. I hope this family can forgive each other and live alongside each other peacefully.
    3 house points
    Mrs Addleton

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