Walking to school.

Posted by Grace S in 100wc | 2 Comments

I looked at the clock.It was time to go to school on a Monday morning( boring) when I saw a red snake he looked very peckish and was trying to eat a mouse.Before I knew it , I was at school.My friend Gabby cycled to school . I told her about what I saw it was very very werid day for me .

I hope it doesn’t happen again tomorow!!!!!! I got in to class and thought ¬†what happened to me and I was not sure . What could happen tomorow………… Maybe there a big dinosaur with big teeth and big feet to destroy the road. It must be my amazing imagination .!!!!!!!!!!

2 responses to “Walking to school.”

  1. Mrs Dibben says:

    I really enjoyed reading this well paced upbeat tale.
    Left me wondering about what adventures tomorrow will bring for you.

  2. Mrs Addleton says:

    Hello Grace,
    I loved this; such a bright and quirky tale. I loved the way you used the word peckish. If you re-read aloud the last sentence you will see that you have missed a word or two – it’s always worth reading your blogs aloud to someone before you publish, or get someone else to read it to you. You have a brilliant imagination which I hope you will use to publish many more blogs Grace.
    3 house points
    Mrs Addleton

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