the creepy hand
Posted by in 100wc
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hello people a hand with a UGLY face it has accaped my house it was a statue on the unit but it suddenly turned alive. The parents didn’t know were it has gone so if us see it plz call this number 123456789 don’t call this number if u haven’t seen him. thank u.
Lauren, if the hand had come alive, would you really want it back in your home???
I don’t think I would, it may cause all sorts of mischief. I like that you’ve written the blog as a wanted post, something a bit different.
I would only ask that on your next blog, you remember to include some punctuation.
Well done Lauren & I look forward to reading your next blog :).
Hi Lauren. I’m pretty sure I wouldn’t want it back if it had come alive and escaped! Super idea though.
Hello Lauren,
It sounds like you have been inspired by the wanted posters I put up around school with this photo on. Don’t forget that blogging isn’t the same as texting so your readers might prefer to read you instead of u and please instead of plz. I also changed the phone number in case it was a real number – it’s very important you don’t give out personal information on the internet!
It was lovely to see a blog from you – well done
2 house points
Mrs Addleton