Previously on the secret hand. A little girl wakes up in the night and sees something in her closet then after a few weeks she goes missing.
The girls mum and dad freak out when they find their daughter missing. Instead they find a note saying: Dear mum and dad, I told you there was a thing in my closet. Now do you believe me? I have gone to a random house in the middle of nowhere. I hope you’re happy now. From your daughter, Lilly. Her mum was shaken. Her dad was speechless. They both couldn’t sleep as their daughter had been taken by some… thing!
Can they get their daughter back? Find out next time on The secret hand.
mya ,
this is really good same with james i and looking forward to reading your third one xx
Hello Mya,
I can understand her parents scepticism about the hand. How awful they must feel now she is gone. I really hope there is a happy ending to your tale.
Hi Mya
I like part two and I am looking forward to your third one. I wish I could give you house points because if I could I would. 🙂
Hi Mya,
You’ve got me wondering now if the little girl left on her own accord like she suggests in her letter or if she has been taken. The way you describe her parents reaction makes me really hope they find her as they are clearly shocked and concerned. My suggestion to improve your blog would be to check you stick with past tense all the way through e.g. They freaked out (rather than they freak out) and they found a note (rather than they find a note). I’ll look forward to the next instalment but remember, if you want your blog to be posted on the 100wc website you need to include this weeks new Prompt.
Well done Mya,
3 house points
Mrs Addleton