The missing hand…

Posted by Lily Anne in 100wc | Tagged | 4 Comments

One evening there was a hand it was called Donald trump 2 and he was a statue.  but he had gone missing… his mum and dad were very upset there looked everywhere but they never found him so if you see him call this number 12345678 but if you don’t see him do not call the number if you lie you will go to jail.

4 responses to “The missing hand…”

  1. Kate Wilson says:

    Well done Lily. I do hope no one rings as you really don’t want it back in your house – do you?!

  2. Andrew Paterson says:

    Hello Lilly,
    I really enjoyed reading your first blog and thought you showed imagination with your story line. Do remember to use capital letters for the first letter of names and to start new sentences. Also try to find other ways to express yourself without relying on the use of ‘but’ as that will help you develop your phrasing and make your writing flow better. Nevertheless, a great effort, well done!

  3. Mrs Addleton says:

    Hello Lily,
    Is this your first blog Lily? It’s wonderful to have you joining the band of bloggers. The face on the sculpture certainly makes it look like it could suddenly come to life and disappear. Similar to Lauren, I changed the phone number you published in case it was a real one because it is very important we don’t give out personal information on the internet. I hope you are going to publish more blogs Lily,
    3 house points
    Mrs Addleton

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