The hand that found out its gender

Posted by Jack in 100wc | 6 Comments

Once in 1,000,000 years a hand will be born into this planet called “earth.” When the hand is born it seeks its own gender so it can fulfil its destiny even though it is cross-gender. So carrying on from the story the said hand seeks wisdom from the great tree of genderness. When the hand gets to the great tree of genderness they need to answer a question and that said question is “Do you like Minecraft?” And all the hands say yes and they find out their gender but if the hand says no it gets burned in a pit of fire.

6 responses to “The hand that found out its gender”

  1. Kate Wilson says:

    Well Jack, you did make me laugh! Quite a twist at the end! I’m hoping most hands like Minecraft as it keeps them really busy!

  2. Gina Ruffcorn says:

    Hello Jack,

    Your story was uniquely creative. The way you phrased your thoughts and the vocabulary you chose gave the tale a regal, epic type feeling. The tone of the piece seemed grand and noble. The first part of the piece was fresh and original.
    As a way to make your writing even better, my suggestion is to not give up on your imagination. The last few sentences detracted from one of the best challenge pieces I have read in quite some time. I wish you would have given more thought and creativity to the ending. It would have been a showcase nomination for me.

    Thank you for sharing your thoughts,
    Gina Ruffcorn (Team 100, Iowa USA)

  3. Andrew Paterson says:

    Hello Jack, I was fascinated by your style of writing which I found both descriptive and informative. Your setting of a world where hands seek to discover their Gender was also intriguing so it was a little disappointing to find your story ending abruptly. Do try go develop your themes a little more.

  4. Hugh O says:

    this was a hilarious blog. Well done Jack!!!!!!

  5. Mrs Addleton says:

    Hello Jack,
    Congratulations on publishing, what I think might be, your first blog. Your idea was very unusual. Did you get inspiration whilst trying to decide if it was a male or female hand? I enjoyed reading your story and wanted to read more although I found the ending a bit abrupt – were you in a rush to publish? Make sure you give proper nouns like Earth a capital letter.
    3 house points
    Mrs Addleton

  6. Cameron H says:

    hahahah I love it

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