cats and dogs

Posted by Ashley T in 100wc | 6 Comments

in the begging cats and dog ruled the world. Then one day suddenly they and felt happiness.  then the public decided “no we do want  animals to be boss” so they set up a campaign against the cats and dogs.

                         three years later,

the dogs and cats have kittens and puppies. Then a few more puppies and kittens arrive. The next day every thing went wrong the humans decided they would move to a another planet instead of fighting. the cats and dogs were happy but they felt alone and didn’t understand “why did they go” said custard [the cat]

                  dun dun dun …….

 

6 responses to “cats and dogs”

  1. Kate Wilson says:

    Gosh Ashley – that was a big decision for the public to make and clearly not the right one if us humans ended up moving planets! I love the dramatic ending, leaving us wondering what will happen next.

  2. Mrs Dibben says:

    Welcome to the wonderful world of blogging Ashley.
    This is a very intriguing tale. The fact that the cats and dogs only realised they missed the humans once they were gone made me think. It reminded me about how easy it is to get caught up in the moment and forget there are good and bad things about having humans around.
    I love fact you end the blog by hinting there might be more to come.

    I look forward to reading your next blog.

  3. Mrs Addleton says:

    Hello Ashley,
    Is this your first ever blog? If it is, well done! The thing I really like about your blog is the decision the humans made to move instead of fight. I hope they tried to resolve their problems by talking about it with the cats and dogs before taking such drastic action though!
    You made good use of inverted commas for the direct speech but remember that all sentences must start with a capital letter.
    Hope you come back to publish many more blogs,
    3 house points
    Mrs Addleton

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