The adventures of Zdogg

Posted by Zach in 100wc | 3 Comments

In the beginning Zach (or Zdogg) was laying down on the couch with his brother, Roman. Then they heard a BANG on the door. Zach went up to the door and got CAPTURED and got taken away to space. ”Lol is this a kind of prank bud?” the weird person responded ”Little earthlings are so pathetic” said the weird crazy guy. Zach was confused then when he pulled his mask down this made soooo much sense to him ”Now do you understand, my name is Jeff from Pig island” he surprised Zach with ”YOUR A PIG??, that’s hilarious” snorted Zach ”You don’t understand mwhahaha!” Laughed Jeff with his long white beard that Zach just noticed. ”I will soon take over the world!!!”

3 responses to “The adventures of Zdogg”

  1. Mrs Addleton says:

    Oh goodness Zach, I can’t believe that any year 4, who has never blogged before, could ever learn how to blog and produce such an original and exciting piece in less than 15 minutes! You have been so clever to use such a variety of punctuation which makes it so easy to read and I love the vocabulary you have chosen, particularly words like snorted instead of said. I am really looking forward to reading more blogs from you.
    3 house points
    Mrs Addleton

  2. Mrs Dibben says:

    Good evening Zach. This is a very unusual blog, I was not sure if it was going to be a sci fi thriller or a comedy, it seems you are aiming to combine the two., very difficult inonly a 100 words.
    Well punctuated and organised
    I look forward to reading your next blog.

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