Peter the Pie

Posted by Lewis B in 100wc | 2 Comments

In the beginning of Earth there was one person Peter the Pie. Peter the Pie lived on a island flying in the sky called Jeff. Jeff was made of cookies and ice cream. Peter could fly and he had one wish to have friends which were also pies. One day a new animal appeared, it was a evil chocolate cake called Chase. Chase chased Peter of Jeff!! Peter landed in a giant cake mikes, then the he went in a oven. peter became giant and he eat Jeff but Jeff was to big so Peter exploded!!!!

2 responses to “Peter the Pie”

  1. Mrs Addleton says:

    Hello Lewis, I always find chocolate cake to be an evil temptation and the Island of Jeff sounds like heaven. In fact, your story reminded me of the bibilcal tale about the garden of Eden. What a clever idea to make Peter rise up in the oven so that he could consume the whole planet. Don’t forget the difference between of/off and that the past tense of eat is ate.
    2 house points
    Mrs Addleton

  2. Mrs Dibben says:

    Oh to live on a planet made of cookies and cream, a dream come true for me.
    This blog made me laugh, I have often eaten so much chocolate I have almost exploded.
    I look forward to seeing your next blog..

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