In the beginning of 2068 Abby died because she smelt of peanut butter and she ate wall paper. A 10 year old boy called Oliver died because he killed 5 people and got the electric chair and a tall boy called Hugh died in 10 seconds because he went in the hunger games where people fight with what the find and if your the last one alive you get 2,000,000 pounds. Charlie,a 10 year old boy was so moist like a baby wipe his eyes and brain turned into water and he flopped onto the floor and died.
The Death Day [my first blog]
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ITS AMAZING!!!!!!!
Jack, it’s wonderful to see you having some fun writing about your friends in your blog and I’m sure they will love reading about themselves. You certainly came up with some interesting ways for your characters to become deceased. I wonder if you got your inspiration from the Mexican Day of the Dead festival that you might have read about whilst researching our new topic, Mexico? Remember that your blog will be published for the world to read so it needs to entertain a wider audience than your friends.
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Mrs Addleton
Welcome to the wonderful world of blogging Jack. You have written this well, however personally I am not a fan of stories where every one appears to die. Death is not my thing so I am hoping your next blog will be a little less dire.
Looking forward to seeing more of your blogs.