in the beginning of the end.

Posted by Gabby B in 100wc | 3 Comments

Today I got out of bed I felt today wasn’t going to be a good day  the beginning  started when there was a massive,gigantic tsunami flooded my home and changed my life entire life my parents past the only people were me and my sister we had to go to a care-home.

It started when dad yelled “TAKE COVER!” I looked out the windowAHHHHHHHHHHH!” mum dad rushed into mine and Jess’s bedroom but as they ran to the room but the tsunami caught them or so we thought……

3 responses to “in the beginning of the end.”

  1. Gabby's Grandma -Sue de Carteret says:

    Wow! This is very exciting, I can’t wait to find out how the two sisters manage to survive the tsunami.

  2. Mrs Addleton says:

    Well done Gabby, it’s lovely to see your first ever blog published. I am particularly impressed with the attention you have paid to the spelling throughout your piece. Your writing about a tsunami reminds me of the terrible flooding from mud slides in America and I wonder if this was the inspiration for your writing? I would recommend reading your blog back out aloud to help with punctuation. I can’t wait to read more from you Gabby.
    2 house points
    Mrs Addleton

  3. Mrs Dibben says:

    Welcome to the wonderful world of blogging Gabby. This is certainly a great tale full of excitement. Hopefully it will not be all doom and gloom and something good will happen to the main characters as I like happy endings.
    You might like to read this back to yourself and add punctuation.

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