in the beginning of the end.
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Wow! This is very exciting, I can’t wait to find out how the two sisters manage to survive the tsunami.
Well done Gabby, it’s lovely to see your first ever blog published. I am particularly impressed with the attention you have paid to the spelling throughout your piece. Your writing about a tsunami reminds me of the terrible flooding from mud slides in America and I wonder if this was the inspiration for your writing? I would recommend reading your blog back out aloud to help with punctuation. I can’t wait to read more from you Gabby.
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Mrs Addleton
Welcome to the wonderful world of blogging Gabby. This is certainly a great tale full of excitement. Hopefully it will not be all doom and gloom and something good will happen to the main characters as I like happy endings.
You might like to read this back to yourself and add punctuation.