The Gifted – Part 11

Posted by Oli S in 100wc | 3 Comments

The 4 Elements linked up holding hands and all of a sudden *Boom* *Flash* *Crash*. What could this be, are there other people with powers out there. Find out today!

*Boom* *Flash* *Crash*, *Boom* *Flash* *Crash*. The 4 Elements started to fly in the air with blue, red, white and brown striped colours flashing around them. A massive rainbow aura surrounded the 4 Elements. *BOOM!*

They all fell and hit the rocky floor *Crash!*. Suddenly a massive tornado filled with rocks water and fire approached the 4 Elements… The 4 Elements stared in amazement. “So… looks like you have found me…

3 responses to “The Gifted – Part 11”

  1. James says:

    Hi Oli,
    I love the cliff hanger and I look forward to see a part 12. Good luck

  2. Mrs Dibben says:

    Ooh, Ollie just when I thought the series was finished you add another twist. Will good or evil prevail?

  3. Mrs Addleton says:

    This is getting exciting Oli and, like all my favourite authors make me do, I find myself trying to predict what’s going to happen. Is this going to be an evil fith element or, I prefer to hope, a force for good? Plasma maybe or is there a clue in the rainbow and it is a wavelength of refracted white light? I like the way you used the word aura but perhaps you could think of some synonyms for flash, boom and crash.
    Mrs Addleton
    2 house points

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