Jane: You know, you never listen too me, we are done!
Jack: Oh hey i’m back, no don’t go
Jane: NO WE ARE DONE!
Jack: NOOOOOOOOO!
THE END
A Little Note:
I hope you liked my first story, I didn’t want to make it long because I am focusing on a story called ‘The Gifted’ and so far (21st December) It has 5 parts which all have 100+ words so i can’t wait for it to be published!
stupid computer I*
why did you rush the ending 9i was excited to see what happens
What no happy ending!
I love the fact you decided to keep this tale truly sad. I really expected the ending to be the opposite of the title, silly me.
Haha,you should go check out my story the gifted which is currently based on 4 elemental powers: Earth, Fire, Water, Air and so far it has 6 parts with over 100 words!
I’ll post some Christmas stories soon as well 🙂