Oliver found an envelope with his name on it . As he opened the envelope it read “find me, I’m waiting for you . you have 120 hours to find me, your time starts now!”. He cautiously opened the door that had the envelope on it…
He saw loads of weird clue like pictures on the walls with numbers 1 to 6 .The thing he didn’t know was they were steps to finding his dream girl . So he started to find his dream girl not knowing what to do or where to start and not knowing what he was in for…
OMG this is amazing:
I like the idea
I like where it’s going
and no grammatical mistakes
🙂