the streets of Southampton- part 2

Posted by Atlanta S in 100wc | 3 Comments

“Anything can happen in Southampton” Oliver thought to himself. As he walked the streets of Southampton , he saw a really beautiful girl . Suddenly, his adventure stopped and ended at 4pm because sadly he arrived at his hotel. The next day he was so eagered to find this girl that he didn’t even meet yet. As he searched everywhere there was no sign of her anywhere. The day went by , searching everywhere he kept seeing glimpses of her , he thought it was just in his head ,but he believed they were clues . As he followed the glimpses of the pretty girl , he came across a very strange shaped door…

3 responses to “the streets of Southampton- part 2”

  1. Mrs Addleton says:

    Atlanta, you have used some great vocabulary in this blog. A little tip when typing, put commas and full stops right next to the word with no space in between – like this. Always leave 1 space after a comma and 2 spaces after a full stop. I’ve set up a special tag for all your blogs!

  2. Mrs Dibben says:

    And so the saga continues. Lovely description really makes me empathise with the boy desperately searching for his girl.

  3. Oli S says:

    I like it 🙂

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