the streets of Southampton – part 1

Posted by Atlanta S in 100wc | 3 Comments

One day  , a boy called Oliver walked the streets of Texas . he always thought that Texas was the place for him.It always had his favourite things like gaming shops, nice restaurants, pretty much anything he wanted .

One day he decided to take a trip to England in the summer because he thought it would be a nice get away from all his crazy family and dramatic moments from his life. So off he went to take part in a whole new adventure ,but what he didn’t know was that one he got there he would fall in love with the place or … someone.

3 responses to “the streets of Southampton – part 1”

  1. Mrs Addleton says:

    Gosh, I’m looking forward to finding out what Oli gets up to!
    Mrs Addleton

  2. Mrs Dibben says:

    Interesting, you have clearly caught the blogging bug.
    Well organised and written. I look forward to reading your next instalment.

  3. Oli S says:

    I really like the start to this story and i really like the idea of leaving it on a cliffhanger.
    Well done for not making any grammatical mistakes and it finally makes sense 🙂
    I just can’t wait to find out what i love or who i love. LOL

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