The bad laptop

Posted by Abby R in 100wc | 7 Comments

“What is this strange, shiny electronic thing? ” The  Gibbon asked with a very confused face. The  Gibbon had never seen a laptop before so he didn’t know what to do with it.  He pressed every button on the key board until !!!!

” Hello ” Siri said.

“aaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh”  the gibbon screamed with surprise as he threw the laptop across the room .

“pick don’t hurt up ouch please.  Bite don’t I ” Siri said sounding very broken .The

Gibbon picked the laptop up  cautiously and exclaimed

“Ooh ooh ooh ah ah”

“Sorry I don’t  speak gibberish” Siri commented.






7 responses to “The bad laptop”

  1. Mrs Dibben says:

    Haha, I completely identify with this monkey, Siri frequently infuriates. I am impressed with your great vocabulary.

  2. Oli S says:

    Nice First blog, its way better than mine:)
    Nice punctuation and it does make sense unlike Atlanta’s lol
    I’m looking forward for part 2 🙂 🙂


  3. atlanta says:

    nice first blog I like it but mines better !!! jk, lol its very funny I like it

  4. charlie says:

    hi abby,
    this blog was very funny and i want a pt2
    from charlie p

  5. Abby R says:

    hi Abby your Amazing 🙂 so was your blog

  6. Mrs Addleton says:

    Hello Abby,
    Your blog really made me laugh when I read it. Inanimate objects do not normally speak so I’m not surprised your monkey was shocked! I hope poor Siri survived the fall and perhaps he can learn monkey language for the next unsuspecting gibbon that comes along!
    I can’t wait to read more blogs from you Abby,
    3 house points
    Mrs Addleton

  7. Miss Hillyar says:

    Wow! I love your use of speech to show Siri is broken- well done Abby! Very creative ideas!

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