The Angry Monkey

Posted by Lauren N in 100wc | 4 Comments
18December2017

On Thursday, the monkey got a new laptop and thought it was really cool once he went on it he was happy.But he didn’t know what to do with it at first but suddenly he got the hang of it and didn’t want anyone to go on it and mess it up.He wanted to add some more things on the laptop like Instagram , Snapchat , Facebook and a few monkey games.He couldn’t get any of those things on there so he started to break everything and few the laptop across the sitting room.Once his wife came in she was shocked what happened.

4 responses to “The Angry Monkey”

  1. Mrs Dibben says:
    December 22, 2017 at 10:04 am

    Lauren, welcome to the wonderful world of blogging.
    This is a great first blog. I loved the twist, when this petulant, childlike monkey, turns out to actually be an adult.
    I look forward to reading your next blog.

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  2. Mrs Addleton says:
    December 18, 2017 at 11:32 pm

    CONGRATULATIONS Lauren on publishing your first blog. I loved this story, particularly the range of emotions the monkey went through, from pride and excitement to possessiveness, frustration and finally rage. The ending really caught me by surprise because I thought it was a child monkey behaving so badly until you mentioned his wife! Don’t forget the past tense of throw is threw (not few which means a small number). I wonder if you have a few monkey games on your computer – they sound like they could be fun. I can’t wait to read more blogs from you.
    3 house points.
    Mrs Addleton.

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